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7:01 PM, Tuesday January 24th 2023

Hi there! First of all you are missing one page of superimposed lines. I'm going to ask you to add that one.

Lines:

Your lines are every now and then fraying on both ends. Pay more attention to putting your pen right on your beginning point. The rest is great!

Ellipses:

You should only draw through your ellipses 2 to 3 times. You draw through them many more times. Your ellipses are drawn with a bit less confidence, but you're on the right way. Some are already drawn confidently! The rest is again done right!

Boxes:

The only thing that I can see here is that your gaps between your boxes are not always small and the corners do not always match with the other boxes with rotated boxes.

You've done a good job!

Next Steps:

1 more page of superimposed lines

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
9:39 AM, Wednesday January 25th 2023
9:41 AM, Wednesday January 25th 2023

That's great! You can continue with the 250 boxes challenge

Next Steps:

250 boxes challenge

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