Hi! I'll be critiquing you're lesson 1 today

Lines

Superimposed lines

Great job with this exercise! There's not that much fraying on the lines, except for the longer lines. You need to work more on the longer lines, there's a lot more fraying compared to the shorter lines, but that's about it for this exercise. Remember to ghost the lines before placing them!

Ghosted Lines

I do see a bit of wobbling and arching, but that's fine. With practice, your lines should get more smooth and confident.

Ghosted Planes

There is a slight wobble to some of the planes but overall it looks fine

Ellipses

Tables of Ellipses

Some of the Ellipses are kind of going into each other, and e are a few that are going out of the boundary/rectangle,and there are spots where you could put extra Ellipses too. I feel like the Ellipses could be a bit smoother with a little bit more ghosting. Other than that nice job

Ellipses in Planes

Nice job with this one, a majority of the ellipses are touching all the sides of the planes, but the Ellipses could be more smoother.

Funnels

For the Funnels, Good job with that one. A majority of them seem aligned, and again the Ellipses should be a bit more smooth with a bit more ghosting.

Boxes

Plotted Perspective

Plotted Perspective looks fine

Rough Perspective

When doing this exercise the back shape of the box should be around the same as the front like this https://imgur.com/a/U6KBuu3, while still going towards the Vanishing Point, and remember "width lines should be parallel to horizon and height lines perpendicular to horizon", which you did pretty well on,but some of the lines have a little wobble.

Rotated Boxes

The outside boxes for the Horizontal and Vertical rotations are really off. It shouldn't be extending out that much. Think of it as the center box rotating up/down, instead of thinking of it as an entirely new box. something like this https://imgur.com/a/XP8WIb3.

Organic Perspective

Nice job with this one. The boxes are rotating enough.

Great job with Lesson 1. The random doodles and font were pretty cool love the creativity. Other than that I'll have you revise a few of the exercises and after that you should be able to move onto the 250 box challenge