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2:45 PM, Thursday May 26th 2022

Hello, I see your work and I see the effort you put.

The confidence is there so that's a good point.

The accuracy on the other hand is missing in some points in particular in the ellipses, especially in the table of ellipses.

I'm sorry to say but I think you don't understood the task there (table of ellipses)... In little sections there're too much variances of ellipses and in the sections where's the curved line you use ellipses as borders not only on the sides... You need to have at least two sides of the ellipses that touches a solid line (in this case the sides of the section/rectangle)...

So that exercise has to be redone after rewatching and rereading the instructions.

The only one more thing I have to say is more a suggestion than a critic, 'cause it's well done, on the organic perspective: try not to correct the lines with further lines. The felt-tip pen is there to make you see the mistakes and so to know where to do better.

In conclusion overall it's a great job. Follow the step I write and after that you can move on onto the next lesson.

Keep the good work and have fun. :)

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11:16 AM, Tuesday June 7th 2022

Hello, thank you so much for replying and sorry for the wait. I honestly thought nobody would be responding to the post after waiting for a month.

I've revised and redrew table of ellipses so please check it out.

https://imgur.com/a/QEWGEOb

2:20 PM, Wednesday June 8th 2022

Hello, no worries, nice to have you back.

Great job that's much better. :D

Now I certainly can approve you to move on.

Have a nice continuing of the journey

See ya :)

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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