Hi and congrats on completing lesson 1. I'll be taking a look at your submission. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a good start and I'm already seeing improvement by the second page with you keeping your starting points much neater and more consistent. You are still struggling on longer lines and curves so there is plenty of room for improvement here. Moving onto your ghosted lines and planes are looking very good. There was a little struggle with some wobble and arcing issues on your page of ghosted lines but you are already showing improvement with your planes. Your accuracy still isn't there yet but you are acheiving smooth confident linework that is only going to get better using this method. Great job.

Your tables of ellipses could use some work. I'm seeing quite a bit of wobble with these which makes me think you are either not ghosting enough and losing confidence in your stroke and slowing down while you are drawing through because you are trying to be too accurate or you are reverting to drawing from your wrist. Either way you want to make sure you draw through every ellipse and focus on trying to keep your shape smooth and consistent and worry a bit less about accuracy. I'm noticing similar issues with your ellipses in planes as well. You are doing a better job drawing through all of your ellipses here but you are having some issues with deformed ellipses. Please check the lesson notes here. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/deformed . Your ellipses in funnels are looking decent but I'm still noticing a few areas where you aren't drawing through your ellipses. Make sure you draw through every single ellipse you do during these lessons even if you feel like you got it right on the first go. Your ellipses still need plenty of work so keeping practicing them in your warmups.

Plotted perspective looks good not seeing any issues here. Your rough perspective exercises turned out pretty well. You are doing a great job extending your lines back on your boxes to check your work. Some of your perspective estimations were quite off but that will get better with practice. I'm noticing a bit of wobble in some of your lines here. When students are working through spatial problems they sometimes forgot to ghost and/or fall back to drawing from their wrist particularly on shorter lines. So just a reminder to look out for both of those things.

Your rotated box exercise turned out pretty good for the most part. You did a great job drawing through all of your boxes and keeping your gaps narrow and consistent. Your linework and hatching here is very good as well. You are having some slight issues with not rotating your boxes enough which is pretty common. A few of your boxes are simply being moved back into perspective instead of rotating. Please check the lesson notes here. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/notrotating Your organic box exercise turned out well. Your linework is good for the most part. You are having some issues while trying to add lineweight and for that my best advice would be to treat it like you would every other line you draw during these lessons. Ghost it multiple times and then draw from the shoulder with confidence. You are also having some convergence problems with your boxes which is pretty typical and something you will get a lot of practice on during the 250 box challenge.

This was a really good submission overall and you showed plenty of improvement as you worked through these homework pages. I think you are understanding most of the important points these lessons are trying to teach and you will just continue to improve with mileage. I'm going to mark this lesson as complete. Keep up the good work!