Hello! Congrats on your first submission in Drawabox. I'm Meap and I will critique your work today :3.

Lines:

Superimposed Lines

• Lines are quite consistent, not wobbly, and only frays at the far end (which is normal at this stage so no worries). This can be improved with enough practice as warm-up exercises in the future. A small tip that can solve this problem (can be applied for all the lines exercises as well): First, take as much time and attempts needed for your ghosting. Next, when you're confident enough to execute the line, focus your eye on the end point and shoot your line instead of following your eye along with the pen. This is just a personal tip so you can try to see if it works for you as well.

Ghosted Lines

• Really good job on this one :3. Lines are consistent with no signs of arcing too.

Ghosted Planes

• Lines are confident and not wobbly so that's good! Do not worry too much on not nailing your designated marks or falling off the trajectory of the lines. This can be improved through further practice as warm-ups and the upcoming 250 boxes challenge. Remember to draw from your shoulder and take as much time as you need when applying the ghosting method.

Overall, well done.

Ellipses:

Tables of Ellipses

• Your ellipses fit snugly against the borders of the table. And the ellipses are evenly shaped and smoothly executed too.

Ellipses in Planes

• Nice attempt to try having your ellipses to touch all 4 edges. Most are evenly shaped and consistent.

Funnels

• Ellipses are fitting nicely against the sides of the funnels. Unfortunately, your ellipses are not aligned to the central minor axis line. Your central minor axis line (the smaller line in the middle) should not be cutting through your ellipses and instead should cut into two equal, symmetrical halves down their narrower dimension by it. I would recommend you follow the steps that are shown on the video since it's a bit easier to understand and visualize.

Boxes

Plotted Perspective

• Remember to keep your verticals perpendicular to the horizon (especially those lines of yours at the back of the box). Give yourself more time when lining up your ruler.

Rough Perspective

• I think you did pretty good. Your front and back faces of the boxes are composed of horizontals that are parallel to the horizon line, and verticals that are perpendicular to it.

Rotated Boxes

• Considering the difficulty of this exercise, I commend your attempt. I think my only nitpick is that one box at the top left corner seems to be unfinished. But other than that, I can tell you followed the core steps of the exercises and the gaps between your boxes are tight and consistent.

Organic perspective

• I could tell you spent a good amount of time for the planning phase so the boxes show little to no divergence cases. Definitely keeps that up for the upcoming 250 boxes challenge. A nice attempt of hatching as well; however, the lines are bunched together pretty tightly. This isn't a huge problem, but it might be resulting in uneven spacing and/or wobble on the box planes. Spreading those lines out a bit could help achieve smooth lines and give yourself enough space to work with to establish uniform hatching. Remember to apply the ghosting method for the lines of the hatching too.

Overall, you did a great job. Just another page of funnels and you're ready to move onto the 250 boxes challenge. And uhhh, it's normal to make mistakes when learning something so don't beat yourself too much about it btw ;v;). What matters is your actions toward them. So, as long as you're willing to learn from your mistakes and prevent them in the future, you're all good :3.