Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

8:29 PM, Friday January 24th 2025

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Hello,

I hope you are able the view the homework by going to the link above (Flickr). Imgur.com did'nt work, I had repeated errors saying the file format was invalid, while it is Jpeg.

I did a second page of ghosted lines and Funnels, because I wasn't quit happy about it.

Thank you for reviewing my work!

Kind regards,

Jan

I added a link to the google drive folder. I kept getting an error with the link to the Flickr album as well.

It didn'nt work to add the webadress above of Flickr, so I pasted it here beneath:

https://www.flickr.com/gp/101243828@N07/p168qaKqX8

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2:30 AM, Sunday January 26th 2025

Welcome and congratulations on finishing the first lesson of Drawabox! I'm Mada and I'll be taking a look at your submission.

Overall you did an excellent job here, but I do have a bit to mention so let's break them down one by one. I'll write the most important things in bold. First of all, don't do any extra work beyond the recommended amount of exercise. Remember the part about grinding and perfectionism, and this will become even unviable later on when the exercises get more complex and longer. If you want more practice, you can do so later in your warmups. Plus you're doing well already in your first attempts, so have more faith in your work!

Lines

Starting with your superimposed lines, these are looking good. Ghosted lines look correctly ghosted and confident too, and there are barely any arching. You've also demonstrated the same confidence in your ghosted planes with a great accuracy. Nothing much to say except keep up the good work!

Ellipses

Now with the tables of ellipses, you've demonstrated a great understanding of the concept in executing confident ellipses. The ellipses in planes are nice, you drew it confidently and snugly in their respective planes.

The funnels are also looking great; you've managed to fit them snugly and aligned to the minor axis and carried the same confidence as in previous exercises. I have no complaints here as your ellipses will tighten as you get more practice. Also this is optional, but you can attempt the optional step of varying the ellipse's degrees as you move outwards in your warm ups, as mentioned here: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/18/step3

Boxes

You've shown a good understanding of how to make 2 point perspective in the plotted perspective. I did see a few skewed back vertical lines here and there, which is usually caused by an accumulation of human error as you plot more and more lines. I assume that's the case and you understand that every vertical line is straight in 2 point perspective. Even if the points are not aligned correctly, try to find a middle ground and draw it as vertical as you can.

You've applied the ghosting method and lines extension correctly for the rough perspective. You also drew the front/back faces rectangular, which is correct for 1 point perspective.

As the notoriously most difficult exercise in this lesson, you've done a great job at doing the rotated boxes. You've rotated them pretty well (while making sure to move the converging lines) and used neighboring elements to deduce the next orientation of boxes, which is the whole purpose of this exercise.

Finally, organic perspective looks great as well. They look like they belong in the same page and the lines converge as they move farther away from the viewer. There are a few hiccups here and there where there are divergences that results in skewed boxes, but overall they're minor and they look pretty solid.

This will get more relevant as you get to the box challenge, but any hatching from this point on should also be done with the ghosting method. It will make your stuff cleaner and more practice is always good! Try to cover the whole area of the box with consistent spacing.

One last thing I want to mention is do not correct your lines by going over it with more lines. This will make your mistake stands out even more with how bold it is, and generally is against the concept of executing planned confident lines throughout this course. Unless it's waaaaay off the trajectory, accept the mistake and trust your muscle memory that it will get better with time and practice.

Anyway, I think you've grasped the concepts of the whole lesson and ready to put them into practice in warmups. Again, congratulations and keep up the good work!

Next Steps:

Move onto the 250 box challenge.

Do the lesson 1 exercises as your regular warmup and don't forget your 50% rule art.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
12:02 PM, Tuesday February 11th 2025

Hi Mandabau,

Thanks a lot for your very torough review! I was very pleased with your feedback for all the exercises. for me drawing the boxes by the 3 axises finaly clicked by doing the organic perspective exercise. I have to admit I grinded a bit near the end of the exercises because it felt that Lesson 1 took forever. Today I picked it up again by doing some warming up. Also what you write about the hatching indeed stands out as messy when I look to my work now. It is hard for me to keep on drawing for fun while doing the exercises, so the 50% rule indeed. Drawing should be fun but for me it is mostly something to get myself to do especially in the evenings, when reading or watching a tv show is not so much.

Greetings

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