As a french beginer like you ,i think it's good job . You didn't anderstood the concept in rotated boxes .You can practice again the rotated boxes in the corner ( Boxes are more in perspective even very thin ! )You can see mine i think not to bad !Your ellipses can be more fluid .But don't worry , the course say that it will come with practice along the way !You make the job very good as say the course and the perfection is comming wih time and peace !Better to practice offen a little than a lot only 1 time ! Goog journey !