This looks good! Confident lines, solid shadows, believable textures.

On the texture sausages, you adjusted the silhouette to reflect the texture, and wrapped it.

The form intersections are convincing.

The piles of sausages look believable.

Also, if you want your stuff critiqued sooner, discord has a "critique exchange" where you do 5 critiques, post them, then they add you to a spreadsheet to get your lesson looked at. I wish I knew how to help with the line weight, but if it's still tough, maybe post that as a separate question here or on discord.