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8:32 PM, Tuesday October 15th 2024

Hello! Looking oranic forms and bugs better but still missing some things! Here are some examples:

Mainly you're forgetting drawing intersections between forms, you're not drawing the forms fully (for example some legs are thicker or have different forms and you aren't adding adittional forms for them) and lastly you aren't drawing through all forms .

So i want you to do one more bug to see if you got it!

Once again if anything isn't clear on the picture or if you have questions please ask! Good luck and great job so far!

Next Steps:

1 more bug in 3/4 view

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:54 AM, Friday November 15th 2024

I've doen another attempt. Let me know if there's anything else.

https://imgur.com/a/xF5vOlh

12:32 AM, Friday December 27th 2024

Godo job! But two main things

1.You're still forgetting to draw the intersections between forms!

2.You're adding forms like 2d shapes instead of 3d forms, if you want to add a new shape to an existing sausage you need to add it fully, like here, they're covered more in lesson 5!

and an example on your own drawing.

So you're making progress but before moving on give me one more drawing, of another bug on 3/4 view, try to get a closer picture and try something different to a fly, preferably something with thicker legs so you can see better the forms.

Next Steps:

1 more bug in 3/4 view

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
6:04 PM, Tuesday January 14th 2025

https://imgur.com/a/lMd2woj

Hello, thanks for the corrections. Here's another attempt. Let me know if there's anything I need to do

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