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7:02 PM, Sunday September 29th 2024

Hello! Here's the critique

Like I said tell me if you have any questions or anything! I want you to do like I said on the video 1 more page of orrganic forms with contour lines and one more bug in a 3/4 view, remember to draw center lines, draw through the forms, draw intersections and focus ond rawing simple forms! Good luck!

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1 more bug in a 3/4 view

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11:49 PM, Saturday October 12th 2024
edited at 4:31 PM, Oct 13th 2024

Hello,

thank you so much for critiquing my work. I have done the corrections- let me know if there's anything else.

https://imgur.com/a/ZLFMTG5

edited at 4:31 PM, Oct 13th 2024
8:32 PM, Tuesday October 15th 2024

Hello! Looking oranic forms and bugs better but still missing some things! Here are some examples:

Mainly you're forgetting drawing intersections between forms, you're not drawing the forms fully (for example some legs are thicker or have different forms and you aren't adding adittional forms for them) and lastly you aren't drawing through all forms .

So i want you to do one more bug to see if you got it!

Once again if anything isn't clear on the picture or if you have questions please ask! Good luck and great job so far!

Next Steps:

1 more bug in 3/4 view

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:54 AM, Friday November 15th 2024

I've doen another attempt. Let me know if there's anything else.

https://imgur.com/a/xF5vOlh

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