8:11 AM, Friday March 8th 2024
hello! i’ll be providing some feedback for your submission:)
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superimposed lines, ghosted lines, ghosted planes
your lines look nice and neat, good job starting them carefully from the same point, and keep them straight and confident
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ellipses
some of your ellipses look a little wobbly, make sure you're ghosting them a few times before you draw them. rereading this section of the lesson notes may help, particularly try going a little faster to prevent the wobbliness from occuring.
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plotted perspective, rough perspective
good work with the plotted and rough perspective, they look great! just make sure that you’re drawing each line to the best of your ability like how you did in the lines exercises, as some of them look wobbly.
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rotated boxes and organic perspective look good to me.
one suggestion would be to make sure that there’s no ink bleeding through from your other pages / on the other side (e.g. the head value studies you seem to be doing) as they make your submitted work harder to look at properly.
the main thing to note would be to try to keep your ellipses less wobbly. everything else looks fine to me, good job!
Next Steps:
continue on to 250 boxes challenge, try to keep ellipses less wobbly during warmup