Thanks for letting me know Kaneki. now without any further ado lets jump into the feedback. As always this feedback will be divided into three parts. and we will explore them one by one.

In this case I'll try to make every effort to provide helpful analysis on your work by breaking down into three parts.

these are the name given specifically because of their order and to represent the specific section of the boxes

Newbies - ( 1-100 boxes) 2. Intermediates - (101-200 boxes) and 3. pros - ( 201- 250 boxes).

PART 1: THE PRAISES ( The job you did well in the challenge):

• Checking your mistakes: your mistakes are slowly reducing in the challenge because of the line extention method (that is checking your mistakes by extending the correction lines away from the viewer) so thats great!.

• while line weight and hatching are optional in this challenge. I'm glad that you did take time to use those tools to reinforce the form you are constructing ( in this case box). we advice you to continue using those tools even in warm ups to build mileages with them.

• Very good job for your ghosting work :thumbs up, meaning you did take time to plan where your lines starts and ends and thought about their relationships with each other and V.p's before executing them. so thats perfect!.

• your lesson 1 lines are nicely carried over here as well so this indicates that the lines are smooth, confident and consistent throughout this challenge as well. so good job on that too!

• I like your way of experimenting with the boxes construction meaning you did take time to construct various degrees of rotation and proportion and perspective applied to your boxes. thats awesome too!.

• You got some pretty decent amount of convergence on the intermediates and pros so good job on that too!.

PART 2: WHERE IT WENT SLIGHTLY OFF? ( Where you should keep an eye on) ( No worries part!)

I think you are headed in the right direction and you have understood the concept of perspective very well so the box challenge has done its job.but there are some minor hiccups in your work that needs to be identified and removed.

so yeah I will do my job to mention you some of the minor issues in your works and you can do your job by including 1-2 boxes in your warm ups to reduce them in the future.

• There are time where you sometimes you repeat over the internal lines of the boxes. It may be due to thinking about accuracy ( like It should have been like this instead of this and trying to correct them). In such cases we advise you to not repeat your lines and move on with accepting the mistakes. So that In my opinion our brain will definitely try to avoid the same types of mistakes.

• they are some minor areas where you did not fully commit your lines ( in case of hatching lines like we can see on newbies 66,72,79 ,96, 168 and 183 ) and you did tend to slow down while reaching the end points thereby creating a subtle wobbly lines at the End. In such cases lifting your pen off while reaching the end points might help and You should always give the confidence a higher priority. so yeah you should be conscious about them as well.

• of course you had improved throughout the challenge but there are times where some of the set of lines converges at a faster rates than the others resulting in converging in pairs. yep this issue you can definitely work on, in your warm ups. by trying to know the relationships between each lines related to its distance and also from their Vps.It's completely and totally normal to have the back corner line slightly off compared to the rest.they have significantly improved at end of your work so nice job!.

• Overall Impressive work Kaneki. keep up the good work. all the issues mentioned above are greatly improved at the end of this challenge but you should remind yourself to avoid those in your future warm ups as well.

PART 3: THE JOB WE CAN DO TO IMPROVE OUR BOXES IN OUR WARM UPS:

• Even if your Ink flow is inconsistent please do not repeat or re attempt or re create your lines. so again try your best to move on that nothing has happened.

• we should continue treat every lines with respect How do we treat with respect?- first we should plan where our lines will start and end by plotting the points and ghost them several times ( hovering in motion) and draw them with confidence and from the shoulder.

• And as always continue to experiment with your boxes and have fun with it. try to construct some bigger and extreme foreshortening boxes as well in your warm ups. experimentation, observation and results ( like in practicals :D) is always important for our growth.

MY POINT OF VIEW:

Your work tells us that you have put a shit ton of energy, focus and time in completing this challenge so hats off for that. I'm sure that you did read through the lesson materials and followed instructions carefully and executed to your best.

this was the nice and solid submission ever.I believe you are quickly headed in the right direction. Yep I'm marking this challenge as complete. dude you should now move on to lesson 2. Keep Inspiring us by the way.

Yo Kaneki Yo ! we made it Again.. Congratulation on completing this challenge. I believe this feedbacks helps.

P.s : May I ask : what pen are you using?- I think they are not ball point pens, they may be sharpies but dunno. I think I have used them, Are they called as Fine writer ( with blue as a color)?

Thank you Kaneki for reading It through.