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5:06 AM, Thursday November 25th 2021

Just replying to this quickly because sometimes people reply to themselves when handing in revisions and we don't get the notification when they do.

Best of luck!

12:43 PM, Tuesday December 21st 2021

Thanks, I only finished it now. here is the link - https://www.dropbox.com/s/7en913lkwimdfh0/20%20boxes.pdf?dl=0

8:53 PM, Tuesday December 21st 2021

Hey there.

These are looking pretty solid overall and I'm glad to see you experimented a bunch.

Your lines still converge in pairs rather than as sets at times but I think you'll continue to improve as you build up mileage during your warm ups.

I'll be marking your submission complete and moving you on to the next lesson.

Keep practicing previous exercises and boxes as warm ups and good luck in lesson 2!

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