Hi PotatoSoup! Congratulations on finishing your Lesson 1 homework. I'm Wendy and I will be reviewing your submission.

  1. Superimposed Lines:

Your lines are confident and smooth. However, your lines are fraying on both ends. Make sure to place your pen carefully at the start of the line. Fraying should be seen only on the end, not the start of the lines.

I also noticed that some of your lines have a little hook at the end. To avoid that, try lifting the pen off the paper the second you hit the endpoint of the line.

  1. Ghosted Lines:

Here your lines are also confident and smooth, and quite straight most of the time. On a few of the lines, you didn't place the pen at the starting dot quite accurately enough.

Also, don't be afraid to draw across previous lines. In two cases, I can see that you lifted the pen before you made it to the ending dot, stopping right in front of a crossing line, only to pick up the line again later. Be sure to draw completely from one dot to the other, and not have any gaps in the line.

There is some overshooting and undershooting of lines. This is okay for now, as your accuracy will surely improve as you continue with other exercises.

  1. Ghosted Planes:

Once more, your lines are confident and smooth. The crosses also meet up in the middle fairly well most of the time.

However, in this exercise also, you don't always place your pen at the starting dot fully accurately. It also looks like you are maybe not always drawing starting and ending dots for every line.

I would make sure to put extra focus on this exercise in your warm-up routine, and put extra attention and care into where you place your pen at the beginning of each line.

  1. Tables of Ellipses:

Your ellipses look pretty confident and smooth most of the time. A little deformed at times, but that is to be expected at this stage.

You also managed to fit your ellipses in snugly most of the time.

However, you didn't keep the angle and degree of the ellipses consistent within each panel section. In many cases, you put ellipses in at random angles, and filled up little holes with smaller ellipses.

In a given section, you need to keep the angle and degree of the ellipses the same until you reach the end of the space. I would recommend that you go over the instructions again for this exercise, and be sure to follow all the rules.

  1. Ellipses in Planes:

The ellipses look confident and smooth. They aren't very tight yet, but this will improve with more practice. Be sure to keep up with your warm-ups.

You are missing the edges of the plane on some of the ellipses, but I can see you are making an effort to try to hit them.

Be sure to draw through each ellipse two or three times. In one case, I saw your drew through the ellipse only one and a half times. In two cases, I saw you drew through your ellipse four times, which is definitely too much and just makes it look unnecessarily messy.

  1. Funnels:

You managed to fit the ellipses fairly snugly most of the time. Most of them are also fairly well aligned to the minor axis, but sometimes it looks like you may be focusing more on fitting them snugly inside the curves then on aligning the minor axis. Some ellipses are a little too loose, so keep an eye on that.

One more advanced trick you could try in your warm-ups is to have a very narrow ellipse in the middle, and gradually increase the degree as you go out from the center. This will help you to develop more control over the degree.

  1. Plotted Perspective:

Pretty clean job here! My only complaint is that the hatching is a bit too loose. Make sure that all your hatch lines properly meet up with the boundaries of the plane, and fill it out entirely. Draw steady lines, like you would for the sides of the box, and ghost them if necessary. Do not use quick flicking strokes, keep it controlled.

  1. Rough Perspective:

Your lines are pretty confident most of the time, but I can see that you redrew a line on occasion. Be sure to draw each line only once, even if it's wrong.

A few of your horizontals went askew, but it looks like you are making an effort to keep them parallel to the horizon line.

Some of your verticals are off as well, but most of them are nicely perpendicular to the horizon line.

The lines have a strong taper to them, which makes me wonder if you flick the strokes. You may need to slow down your lines a bit, and make it an even, steady stroke.

The perspective estimates on some of your depth lines are quite off, especially the ones that are further away from the vanishing points. However, that is to be expected, and things will improve with more practice.

  1. Rotated Boxes:

Your arrangement of boxes came out fairly symmetrical, and the space between the boxes is nice and tight. Some of the boxes don't seem to quite rotate. Instead, they just move back in perspective without rotating.

Overall though, you did quite a good job with this difficult exercise, well done!

  1. Organic Perspective:

Your boxes demonstrate a good sense of 3d space.

I see a few doubled up lines here as well. I know it's tempting to try and fix a line that went wrong, but make sure to draw each line only once even if it went askew.

Be sure to plot out dots for all the corner points, and then draw steady lines in between them. It looks like you are using quick flicking strokes for these, and like you don't always bother to put down points.