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6:52 PM, Tuesday November 30th 2021

So these are improved but you're only extending 2 sets of lines instead of all 3.

It's important that we extend all 3 or we don't get nearly as much information.

Overall these are improved enough that if you extend all 3 in your warm ups I think you'll continue to become more consistent so I'll be marking your submission complete.

Keep practicing boxes and previous exercises as warm ups and good luck in lesson 2.

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Move on to lesson 2.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
10:26 PM, Tuesday November 30th 2021

Hi Tofu,

Thanks again for more feedback. I think I understand when you talk about extending all three sets of lines, but could you give me an example?

Thanks

Dom

12:23 AM, Wednesday December 1st 2021

If you take a look at box 20 you'll see a set of lines extends to the upper left and another set extends to the upper right. A third set should be extending downwards as well.

You can see this demonstrated in the guide I linked in your critique as well.

Hope that clarifies things.

9:39 PM, Wednesday December 1st 2021

Thanks Tofu. Yes, I thought you meant downwards, just as I marked them in my original submission. What I couldn't get was that when I extended the lines downwards, the lines seemed to remain parallel more often than the other two sets with less convergence or divergence. I looked through your guide after the 250 boxes but I think I still need to practise a lot more before I really get to grips with what is going on in terms of the effects of foreshortening on lines, and how the different lines relate to one another and how one set of lines impacts on another set of lines.

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