Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
6:47 PM, Tuesday March 24th 2020
Hello. I finished Lesson 1 around december last year but didnt got criticised so here I am reposting it. Please criticise if you have time :)
Looking at the color of the ring around your avy, I’d say you’re eligible for official critique. Did you mean to post this to the community?
Hello. Official critique means criticised by Uncomfortable? If so Its impossible I am not a patron right now.
Didnt I post it on my sketchbook? I did not know other ppl could see what I add. I didnt figured out how the website works.
Sorry!- my mistake. The color for the $3 patrons is (was!) too similar to the $5 patrons’, and only the latter is eligible for critique. I’ll look through this, then.
... was my plan, but this is just the lines section! Lesson 1 consists of 3 sections: lines, ellipses, and boxes.
But!, your lines look great! I’m especially pleased to see all of the missed points in the ghosted lines/planes exercise. Getting frustrated with their lack of accuracy and decreasing their speed (and therefore their confidence) is a trap a lot of students fall into. Boldly continuing to be inaccurate, in exchange for confident, is the right thing to do- well done!
See if you can post the remaining 2 sections, if you’ve completed them, and I’ll look through them, too~
Hello! Thank you so much for the critique I did not expect to receive one so soon after submitting. I took a pause for drawabox and came back but yeah thank you for taking your time to look throught. I dont know why this happened I think I posted the whole lesson but somehow the link didnt work and I couldnt saw. I'm sorry for my english btw thanks again :)
When you post something as a finished lesson it shows up on the main page of homework submissions, meaning that more people can see it. Partial submissions and other drawings get posted exclusively to your sketchbook.
I'm assuming that you were a patron and have since stopped pledging? If you pledged and had an official critique happen, then you would need the community to review this for you. If you pledged and never got your official critique, you should have some credits available to use. To use them you would need to resubmit this lesson for official critique (there's a button on the submission page).
If you need community critique just reply to this and I'll get you squared away as soon as possible! There's a bit of a backlog currently overall, but we can help each other out~
I understand now!Thank you! Yes I was a patron for some time but I had 3$ one.
Hi. thanks for reposting this. But the homework is incomplete. You also need to post the Ellipses and Boxes homework assignments before someone will grade it. The instructions on the site can be confusing at first, but they want you to post all the assignments from lesson 1 at once, not after each section.
Hi! Idk what you mean by repost. I did reposted the complete homework (on g drive not imgur) and has been critiqued and I leveled up since then(lvl 3 currently) .
Is there a way to delete a post? I didnt find it. Sorry about that
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