Hello there, good luck with all that :) great thing starting early anyway on to the critique

Lines

Some of the superimpossed lines have fraying on both ends , at this point we only expect it at the start like so.

https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/1585f266.jpg

To solve this, ghost your line and then put your pen on the start dot and quicly move it to the end dot. Of course after you have ghosted this multiple times. The ghosted lines look good , nice straight and confident.

Ellipses

You need to ghost your ellipses more, they do look confidently executed but ghost them. Ghosting helps us achieve acuracy. The span of the lines of your ellipses tell me you miss the mark and the expand the radius to fit the space you planned for it. Rather ghost it where you want to put it, then fully execute it. In your funnels some of your ellipses are not touching the walls or archs of the ellipse, I do see one row that has gaps. I see some of your ellipses are drawn through 4 times. you must drawn through minimum and prefered 2 times and maximum 3 times as stated here

https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/a76a8906.jpg

Boxes

For rough perspective the vertical lines of the boxes must be perpendicular to the horizon and the horizontal lines must be paralell to the horizon. Like so

https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/cc14a4f6.jpg

your boxes are distorted and look more like this

https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/6bac0e3b.jpg

try and keep the above in mind.

I dont see your plotted perspective, but if its the one I think it is, you must draw through all your boxes using a ruler, see the lesson again.

In Rotated boxes you have drawn over lines, you must not draw over lines, U plot a line, ghost it then execute it with confidence. If the line is not satisfactory then You move on(this applies to all lines in all lessons unless stated otherwise). Dont draw over lines. Your boxes do seem to be rotating however.

Organic perspective is good , however please plot your lines.

I will ask for revision

1 page rotated boxes, what I want here is for you to plot your line and not redraw lines

1/2 page organic perspective and other half table of ellipses

ghost all ellipses

ghost all lines ( planning where you will be putting it)

execute with confidence

Use your shoulder

Draw through ellipses at least twice and at most thrice