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8:11 AM, Thursday August 27th 2020

Thanks for all those observations. By looking up with up a new eye to my work, I've also noticed

1- In the ghost plane & ellispses planes exercices I didn't occupied enough space on the paper sheet

compared to the homework example

2- In the table of ellipses I drew them too quickly and almost all my ellipses shapes have a blank space

3- I didn't draw enough boxes in the plotted perspective and the rough perspective exercices.

In the same part of the sheet, when shading I changed lighting whereas I should have chosen only

one spot and if this spot was natural light/ sun light or artificial light/ lamp light

I've remade some exercices "ellipses in plane" "table of ellispes" and also a page of superimposed lines. Here is the link

https://imgur.com/a/IIk7lmB

I go myself a drawing gun and I think it will help me with the curved lines for the funnels. In a video I saw uncomfortable telling a student which used a paper tape rolls to draw the curves of the funnels. Could you please tell me if I'm heading in the right direction (or not)?

5:30 PM, Thursday August 27th 2020

To be honest not really. You didn't even listen to the advice I gave in the first few paragraphs of my critique regarding keeping a clearly defined starting point with your superimposed lines and you still aren't drawing through your ellipses at all. Like I said you really need to go back to very start of these lessons and go through all of the material again. Read all of the lessons and watch all of the videos. Take notes and take your time with this.

4:22 AM, Friday August 28th 2020

I can't believe I did a ellipse with only one line again. T_T

When you have some time could you please post the critiques for the two last exercices of lesson in my submission: the rotated boxes and the organic perspective?

May be I rushed them also.

Anyway, with all those epic fails, I'm sure I didn't pass and need to focus on drawing through ellipse using correctly the minor axis for my next sumission.

7:52 AM, Monday September 7th 2020

Ok, I follow your advice re-read the article and printed the images called "here is what a homework page should look like" and looked as them while making the exercices.

I've posted some new pictures.

https://imgur.com/a/y7cosfv

Feel free to comment as you see fit ^_^.

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