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6:42 PM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022

Hello LukeSnywalker, Thank you for critiquing on my 250 Boxes Challenges and I completely agree that I get a confused when I start the procedure on the making the back corners of the box, so I'm glad that you recommended me to watch Scyllastew's video, it was very helpful and gave me more thought on how to draw a box! Here is my revisions on my 15 boxes, on the last page I felt that box 11 was too close to the edge of the paper, so I put another paper behind the box to give it more room when using my red pen to show the convergence.

Here's my revision:

https://imgur.com/a/7XtrT3z

6:23 PM, Wednesday August 24th 2022

The boxes in your revisions of course still aren't perfect, but good work on keeping the vanishing points farther away from the boxes and I'm glad ScyllaStew's video is helping you. This does look like an improvement over your original submission, so I think you can go on to lesson 2. Keep drawing one or two boxes during your warmups though so you can get those convergences down.

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