Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
9:02 PM, Sunday January 16th 2022
Doing my best my best!
Good job on Lesson 1!
Lines
Good job on the lines! The biggest issue is that the superimposed lines are pretty wobbly at parts, but your other ghosted lines look fine, so I'm not sure that's much of an issue anymore. Overall, not much wrong here.
Ellipses
These are pretty solid, too. You have some accuracy issues, but it's pretty much at the level that you'd expect for a first attempt. Actually, your accuracy is better than mine, I'll admit that. A couple of your ellipses on the funnel exercise look a little diagonal, though. Make sure you're not drawing them at an angle.
Boxes
On the plotted perspective exercise, you seem to have put some of the boxes too far outside of the circle that the vanishing points form: https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/202962fd.jpg. Otherwise, you did very good at this one as well. Your lines get a bit wobbly on the early boxes, but you seem to already be improving there.
Overall, this is really good. There's not much to critique here, as far as I can see.
Next Steps:
Do the 250 Box Challenge
Thanks! I've noticed that after pauses i come back to drawing wobbly lines, so now I do a bit of "warm up ghosting" (drawing a line 10-20 times) before doing it again.
Thank you very much for leaving a critique, means a lot to
Right from when students hit the 50% rule early on in Lesson 0, they ask the same question - "What am I supposed to draw?"
It's not magic. We're made to think that when someone just whips off interesting things to draw, that they're gifted in a way that we are not. The problem isn't that we don't have ideas - it's that the ideas we have are so vague, they feel like nothing at all. In this course, we're going to look at how we can explore, pursue, and develop those fuzzy notions into something more concrete.
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