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1:26 AM, Friday October 14th 2022
Hii, I'm Zxem. I'll be your critiquing your work. So I'll separate the section into 3 which are lines, ellipse and boxes.
LINE SECTION
• Superimposed Lines - you did a great a job drawing lines with confidence. You should also try practice a longer line since most of them are short. One thing to keep in mind which is that the line should never fray on the starting dot. It'll be better if you put the pen carefully in the beginning, it's ok if the lines become frayying in the end.
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• Ghosted Line - Again you did a great job drawing a clean lines. I can see a few of the lines which are overshoot and didn't reach to the point but it's okay, soon you'll better and again you did a gread job for not repeating the lines even though some lines didn't reach to point B.
Reminder - Don't forget to ghost the line before you put the pen down. So ghosting the lines multiple times before you put your pen down will give confident when you put your pen down.
• Ghosted Plane - Again you are doing good in this one too but I see a similar mistake to Ghosted line. It's very important to put a line with a starting to ending dot for applying the ghosting method.
ELLIPSE
• Ellipse In Plane - Again you did a good on this one too . There are a few of the ellipse are overlap but it's ok since it's a few ellipse that are overlap so keep in mind the ellipse shouldn't be overlap.
Again it's also important to ghost the ellipse before you put your pen down . By doing gosting the ellipse you'll give you a confident to draw darker line. Since most of the lines are kinda light.
• Funnels - I don't have comments on this, since you did a great job by drawing through 2 or 3 the ellipse.
BOX
• Plotted perspective - you are doing good , I don't have any comments on this one since you are following the instructions.
( Correct me if I'm wrong, TQ )
• Rough perspective - The boxes of the lines are light and you should do ghosting line before put the line down. For the boxes, you'll be better soon once you do 250 boxes.
• Rotate boxes - It's looking good. There are not much gap between the boxes and one thing I want you to keep in mind is that lineweight should be added with confident ghosted lines.
Overall this is my opinion so feel free to add things you think that are important. TQ
Forgot. Another revision is
1 page of ghosting lines.
Next Steps:
So I would you to do a revision.
• 1 page of Superimposed Lines - you can try to practice longer lines.
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7:39 PM, Tuesday October 4th 2022
Hi you
I like your homework. Good quality lines and they are confident. I just would like to point to your last paper, the boxes. The perspektive is fine, but for the futur try to be more precise in the corners of the boxes.
May you continue with your quality. Good work
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