Hi, really sorry I haven't given you feedback until now. Life's been busy

We've got a few things to go over so let's get right to it

Superimposed Lines:

The way you've layed out your Superimposed Lines makes it really difficult to critique because there's just a mess of lines everywhere. It also seems like you've made every single line roughly the same size, that size being the entire page. Your Lines look very wobbly, I recommend starting off with smaller lines to get used to the motions of drawing with confidence. Re-read through the notes on mark-making again, I think you've missed many of the important things in there.

Ghosted Lines:

These lines look really wobbly, especially the longer ones. I recommend trying to work with smaller lines to begin with, using the ghosting method for each one. When you're comfortable with that, you can try some bigger lines making sure to use your shoulder for the movement.

Ghosted Planes:

Overall these are actually really good. Well done! I don't know why you did 4 pages though, you're only supposed to do 2. Please pay attention to exactly what the lessons ask you to do. Also, I don't advise re-drawing over a line that you mess up. If Don't try to go over lines a second time

Tables of Ellipses:

This is an incomprehensible mess. Please go back to the homework and FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS. You've drawn your grid lines without a ruler, which is not what you're supposed to do. The table that contains the ellipses should be drawn with a ruler, the focus is on ellipses in this exercise. Also there's random scribbly lines all over the page that completely overshadow your ellipses. Please follow the Demo and use the example homework as a reference. You've also done three pages instead of two, and I can see a random drawing of a face on one of your pages. Follow the lesson examples.

Ellipses in Planes:

Overall, pretty good. Ellipses look confident, most are drawn through multiple times. A couple of them deform slightly, and some haven't been drawn through fully, so bear that in mind.

Funnels:

This is a difficult exercise, so you made a good attempt here. Couple of things to watch out for though; Some ellipses look wobbly and haven't been drawn through multiple times. Make sure you prioritise confidence, drawing through your ellipses 2 or 3 times to keep them even. They're also skewed at different angles in some of the funnels, you want to try to keep them all aligned at the same angle as they go across.

Plotted Perspective:

Your lines are built up with chicken-scratch which they shouldnt be. They should be drawn with a ruler in this particular exercise. Additionally you're hatching your boxes incorrectly. (I've explained why in the rough perspective). Please follow the demo more closely.

Rough Perspective:

You're drawing WAY too many boxes, such that you're not even plotting back all of them to the VP to check the convergences, which defeats the point of this exercise completely. Also, try to avoid drawing them so far out, it starts to break down a bit at the edges due to distortion. Also you shouldn't be shading with a red marker and random squiggles. Additionally you shouldn't be hatching more than one side, ESPECIALLY not the inner sides/sides that face away from the viewer. This will break your persepective and UTTERLY undermines the goal of hatching. If you're going to do Hatching do it EXACTLY AS THE LESSON TELLS YOU TO DO.

Rotated Boxes:

This is a really good attempt, well done. Only issues are that you've outlined all of your boxes in red, when you don't really need to, and your hatching looks a little messy and scribbly. Each hatching line should be ghosted and drawn straight.

Organic Perspective:

This was a good attempt, well done. No glaring errors and you'll be able to practise your perspective when you get to the 250 box challenge.

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Thanks, Zak

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