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9:46 PM, Monday March 29th 2021

Your lines look good, I just have a few minor notes: keep a look out for curved lines and try to draw from your shoulder more. Your ellipses are also good, a few of them are wobbly and don't hit the edges of the thing you're drawing them in so make sure you ghost them before you draw them so you're confident and draw them confidently and smoothly when your pen hits the paper.

Your boxes look great! The rotated boxes are a bit shallow, but that's not a big deal.

Great work!

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10:15 PM, Monday March 29th 2021

Thank you for the critique and the tips! I'll keep this in mind for my curved lines

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