8:43 PM, Sunday May 10th 2020
Thank you for continuing to work on this! Your new pages look a lot cleaner and your boxes are more solid feeling as a result, as well as your hatching looking much cleaner and deliberate, keep up the good work.
You still have a few persisting issues, namely, your extension lines being drawn in the wrong direction take a look at this for some more info. Both 14 and 17 have this issue, are you thinking about how the lines move away from you as you plan your box?
Next Steps:
If you would draw 10 more boxes in the manner of the last 20, being nice and deliberate. This time pay close attention to the direction you extend your lines and do y our best to extend them away from the camera pov, even if they diverge when you do.