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2:57 AM, Tuesday April 28th 2020

Lines are p good in general. Only thing I can notice is that you aren't marking the starting and ending dots before drawing some lines on the ghosted planes, you should do it with every line.

Ellipses are p good, though a bit wobbly. Remember that confidence is always more important than accuracy in drawabox. Don't hesitate to sacrifice accuracy to get the ellipses as smooth and confident as you can.

Boxes look good in general, though you have an important mistake, which is repeating lines. No matter how off a line is, don't repeat it, keep going as if it was correct.

You can add lineweight with a single superimposed line to parts that overlap, to clarify the relationship between 2 boxes.

Perspective has issues on the organic perspective, but dont worry, you'll work on it on the box challenge.

You're missing also the funnel exercise, marking this as complete as you're doing a p good job, but feel free to post the funnel here if you want me to look over it.

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P good job so marking as complete. Keep up the good work and good luck in 250 boxes!

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9:55 PM, Wednesday April 29th 2020

Thanks for the feedback. I just miss to upload that to the drive and now is on top of the list. Thanks again for your time. I will work on the boxes keeping in mind your suggestions.

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These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.

Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).

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