Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction
7:38 AM, Sunday May 10th 2020
This is the feedback I already received from the discord group:
@Lea some bulging sausages, remember they are 2 identical balls connected by a tube of consistent width. Arrows good, (don't let them get out of the page), textures p good in general, only thing is the transitions to white could be a bit smoother. Organic intersections look p good, but try to stick to simpler forms. In form intersections if you do the hatching take care with it, and don't overdo it, for example, doing it on spheres totally flattens them out, so I'd avoid it.
In form intersections stick to shallow foreshortening forms, as this exercise's main objetive is to keep objects in the same scene believably. Don't repeat lines, and focus on confidence over accuracy (some of the ellipses were a bit wobbly).
Pretty good job overall! good luck with lesson 3 :thumbsup: