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4:40 PM, Wednesday July 7th 2021
edited at 4:41 PM, Jul 7th 2021

https://www.dropbox.com/s/3rw3crn4hz5075t/15%20Box%20Revision.pdf?dl=0

"15 Box Revision"

Hi, good ScyllaStew,

I reviewed all your material, practiced, and tried to increase the size of the boxes, push the convergences, make the silhouette weight lines taper more, and ghosted every single line including shade hatching.

Thank you very much for your attention and wisdom.

Daniel

edited at 4:41 PM, Jul 7th 2021
2:54 PM, Thursday July 8th 2021

This is a good improvement overall. I can see some good improvement in the quality of your mark making. Your sets of lines are also doing a better job of converging towards their shared vanishing point.

I will go ahead and mark this lesson as complete and you can now move onto lesson two.

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Continue to listen 2!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
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