6:42 PM, Friday September 4th 2020
Hello I'll be reviewing your work.
Ok so first of all i can say there's huge improvement on your drawings, less wobbly lines, straighter lines etc. Good job! I can also see improvement on your spacial imagination. One thing id appreciate would be if you drew less boxes in 1 page 4 would be preferable.
I think you have done a great job but i feel like your box VPs are always so close to the box itself, which makes me want to see how your boxes will look if the VP is further away. Please draw another 2 pages of boxes with VPs being further away from the boxes itself and resubmit only those 2 pages. I don't really have anything else to add.
Keep at it.
2x more Pages with boxes where the VP is lot further away from the box