2:49 PM, Tuesday June 22nd 2021
Don't think in terms of the whole box, nor just lines. Try to think in terms of planes, how is this surface going to behave against another one?
The intersection should flow through both surfaces.
You did a good job on the lesson, but I have a piece of critique for the organic intersections' minimalist cast shadows.
You did a great job at conveying form through the sagging and thickening of the sausages but you missed a huge opportunity to describe the surfaces beneath them.
Try doing again the organic intersections with a focus on cast shadows. Look for Uncomfortable's example homework if you catch yourself being timid with