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7:53 PM, Sunday January 1st 2023
edited at 2:39 PM, Jan 2nd 2023

Hi.

The lines: they're shaky. I hope you use the ghost method. And you draw from the shoulder. Also you need to move confidently and fast enough and smoothly~~.

Ellipses: On funnels, the line in the middle should cut the ellipses into symmetrical halves.

Rough perspective: Horizontal lines should run parallel to the horizon line. Vertical lines should run perpendicular to the horizon line.

Congratulations.

Proceed to the execution of 250 boxes)~~

edited at 2:39 PM, Jan 2nd 2023
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2:38 PM, Monday January 2nd 2023

Hi.

The lines: they're shaky. I hope you use the ghost method. And you draw from the shoulder. Also you need to move confidently and fast enough and smoothly.

Ellipses: On funnels, the line in the middle should cut the ellipses into symmetrical halves.

Rough perspective: Horizontal lines should run parallel to the horizon line. Vertical lines should run perpendicular to the horizon line.

Next Steps:

Congratulations.

Proceed to the execution of 250 boxes)

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