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4:05 PM, Wednesday July 1st 2020

Lines and ellipses are p good in general, they do get a bit wobbly at times, specially your ellipses. So don't forget that in these exercises you should be focusing in confidence even if your accuracy gets worse.

Boxes are looking pretty good too. The issues you have is that in both the rotated boxes and organic perspective you got mistakes on the perspective of the boxes, which is completely normal, and nothing to worry about as you'll practice it on the box challenge.

Last thing I can catch is that you're repeating some lines on the rotated boxes. No matter how off a line is, don't repeat it. Leave it be as redoing it will make the drawing messier.

Next Steps:

First of all, congratulations on finishing lesson 1! Your next step is the box challenge.

As I marked this as complete, you are now qualified to critique lesson 1 submissions.

-Doing critiques is a way of learning and solidifying concepts. I can atest to that after having done hundreds of critiques. There are a lot of concepts that I did not understand, and thanks to critiquing I started understanding them. Which made me learn a lot more through the course.

-Another thing is that as the number of current submissions is super high, if you critique some critiques, those would be less critiques I'd have to critique before reaching your next submissions, so you'd get your critiques faster. The new system ordering submissions also makes that the more agrees your critiques have the higher you'll be placed in the queue of critiques, which will improve your chances of getting critiques faster as well.

It's totally optional of course, I won't force anyone to give critiques. But me and the other people who are critiquing would be super grateful if you gave it a shot.

Good luck on the box challenge, and keep up the good work!

NOTE: here's a quick guide on critiquing lesson 1 submissions.

There are a few people that feel hesitant to critique because they feel they aren't ready to it so hopefully it'll help you in case you are one of those people.

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 3 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
8:38 AM, Thursday July 2nd 2020

Elodin thank you so much for spending your time reviewing my work , I really appreciate it. Yeah I know about ellipces and I'm working on it ( can see improvement already). Thanks again have nice time drawing bro *)

10:32 AM, Thursday July 2nd 2020

No worries and keep it up! :D

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