This imgur album contains my complete Lesson 1.
If you have a moment to leave feedback, thanks for helping me improve in the next lesson! I appreciate it.
If you don't, thanks anyhow for contributing to this great community of learners. I'm glad to have found it.
Lines
Superimposed lines look nice and confident. When drawing the lines after ghosting , place the fineliner at the start of the line then draw in the line to create a consistent starting point. The ghosted lines look confident for the most part I can see a bit of wobble towards the ends, I assume you are slowing down when approaching the end. You can rather maintain the same speed but lift your pen off the page when at the end dot. Its worth a try. Lines of the ghosted planes look okay.
Ellipses
Some of the ellipses are confident but not all. It looks like you drew some slowly to make them accurate. The drawing slowly has resulted in those points and bumps on the ellipses circumference especially in the ellipses in planes exercise. You should instead ghost the ellipse where you want to place it until you are confident with the motion. Then once confident , draw in the ellipse with speed. The ghosting will take care of accuracy to you can draw smooth ellipses.
Boxes
plotted perspective looks okay. Good attempt at the rough perspective exercise, I can see you are plotting and planning your lines , good job. do remember in rough perspective that the vertical lines of the boxes are perpendicular to the horizon and the horizontal lines of the boxes are parallel to the horizon.
In the rotated boxes exercise I can see you are thinking of rotating the boxes in space and applying it. Copying the video lesson line for line can help you catch things you missed.
The organic perspective exercise is also good.
I think you can move on to the 250 box challenge, Good luck:)
remember to warmup https://drawabox.com/lesson/0/3/warmups
Thank you! Good feedback, and very fast too.
Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.
Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.
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