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3:08 AM, Saturday December 23rd 2023
There's some minor fraying on superimposed lines which is to be expected, don't be dismayed!
Your ellipses look good for the most part but there's some minor deformations. You can try practicing some more by yourself, but they're pretty good, you'll improve with practice.
Some lines on rough perspective look a little wobbly, which can obviously improve with practice, your second page shows clear improvement.
Organic perspective looks really good.
Your lines are improving and looking straighter! Great job, move on.
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10:02 PM, Tuesday December 26th 2023
Thanks so much for your input! I really appreciate it! And I'll definitely be practicing my ellipses. I have a practice page of the table of ellipses and a page of just random ellipses so I kind of had an idea that I needed some more time with those, (and rough perspective. My rough perspective was really rough lol). Thanks again TINYELEPHANT! I really do appreciate you taking the time to go over my homework. And Happy Holidays to you and your family!
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