Lines
The superimposed lines tend to divert, specially the long ones. Something to consider when doing this exercise in the future
Your ghosting is curvy. Mine improved when I really focused on using my shoulder as the pivot. Good job and keep practicing
The lines on your ghosted planes look more straight. When the preasure of hitting the final dot goes away it tends to make it easier to draw a staright line. Try to do that first and then later work on precision
Ellipses
The ellipses in the plane sis a tough exercise. You tried hard and there is more plractice here needed but for the starter they are ok
The cones look pretty good and you stayed true to the 2 loops max goal
Boxes
Good job with the rough perspective
The corners of the rotaing boxes are not complete, they are missing the lines behind, but youy had a good try
Good job with the fading boxes
Thank you for the critique, appreciate it :D
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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