Hey there! I will be looking over your homework today ^^ Congrats on making it through the first lesson :>
I will be pointing out what I think you did well before explaining where I believe you have room to improve. If needed, I will ask you to do some revisions before sending you on your way.
Lines: I think you're doing a good job with the lines. You're aiming to place one confident line, bringing it from Point A to Point B. Fraying in the first assignment is normal to this degree and you'll improve on it if you decide to incorporate this assignment in your warm-ups, but I think this is totally fine. Throughout the lessons you also seem to be improving.
Ellipses: Your ellipses are looking good as well! Confident and smooth. One thing I noticed is that you seem to have trouble reaching all of the borders in the Table of Ellipses assignment. The assignment is to fit all the ellipses neatly within their respective boxes, also neatly against each other. You tend to have several openings here and there. I think you're improving by the Ellipses in Planes assignment, but you might want to keep an eye on it!
Boxes: Your boxes look good as well! Your lines are confident and smooth most of the time. The rest is just a matter of exercise so I wouldn't bother worrying about it. Just keep working on these things in your 15 minute warm ups and you'll be good to go!
This should be all, I don't think there's anything I could ask any revisions for, good job! You can head onto the 250 Box Challenge. Wishing you lots of luck and patience!
Also, your nail polish looks amazing!
Next Steps:
Head onto the 250 Box Challenge!
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
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