This is better - you're applying the correct steps for the most part, and your branches structures are adhering more closely to the instructions. There's just one thing that I called out in my original critique that got lost in the shuffle, and it definitely would have been very helpful to you.

In my original critique, I pointed out the fact that in a lot of cases you were drawing very small, and in doing so, you were severely hindering yourself. Drawing small, as I explained before, limits our brain's capacity for spatial reasoning, and also makes it harder to engage our whole arm, causing us to slip back to drawing from our elbows and wrists. All of this results in clumsier linework and can seriously impede the flow of those strokes.

Your work here still has just as many drawings that are fairly small, even when those drawings have loads of space available around them.

Now, I am going to mark this lesson as complete, but I expect you to put a lot of focus towards drawing bigger for the next lesson. Your focus is on executing each mark, and each drawing, to the best of your ability - and if that means that you'll be able to pack fewer drawings into a given page, that's totally fine.