Hey there Wolfg, good job on completing lesson 1. Let's get right to your critique.

Starting with you super imposed lines you are showing a good level of confidence and execution with your shoulder. Your next step in progresion would be to start playing aorund with your pacing to try and get your lines to lie more on top of one another as this is how we go about applying line weight in later lessons so it's a good skill to practice. Some of your ghosted lines are looking a little more wobbly as you try and hit the target, but others are much sharper and confident. Remember that we prioritize flow over accuracy so keep executing your lines in a sharp confident manner and accuracy will come in time.

Your ellipses overall are looking very confident and crisp. You are drawing through correctly, there aren't really any major flat portions on your ellipses (but there are some occasions where you have pointy corners at one end), and your lines are smooth continuous strokes. Your ellipses in planes are making contact with the plane edges in the correct spots to ensure that the ellipse is sitting snugly within the bounds of the ellipse and not floating around. Your tables of ellipses are packed nice and tight to prevent any room for ambiguity. You do have a tendency to draw your ellipses without a concrete goal, especially in the taller rows, so make sure you are watching out for that so you can get the most out of your exercises as you continue to progress. Your funnels exercise is looking good - your minor axes are correctly aligned and you're keeping things snug within the curved bounds.

Your rough perspective boxes are right on track. For the most part your horizontal lines are parallel to the horizon and verticals are Perpendicular. There are some lines where you could have benefitted from more ghosting and a confident s troke but overall your line quality here isn't terrible. Your converging lines are on track for where we expect lesson 1 submissions to be and as you continue to practice drawing lines to points that are further away your accuracy will improve.

Good job on completing the rotated box exercise! our only goal here is for students to push through to completion to the best of their abilities so they can be exposed to new types of spatial puzzles and ways to go about solving them, so good job! Your lines are looking ok - some are definitely more confidently drawn than others. Your boxes are nicely packed so that you can properly leverage adjacent lines as perspective guides. Unfortunately your boxes are not rotating so much as skewing and being shifted over so give this gif another study and try to internalize how the rotation of the box is driven by the motion of the vanishing point along the horizon. Overall though you are off to a great start here.

Finally let's take a look at your organic perspective. You are doing a good job drawing a lot of boxes but remember to ghost every single line and execute them with the same level of care. You are doing a great job of dictating a distinct fore, mid, and background by scaling your boxes which serves to establish the illusion of depth and 3d space on the page. This illusion is further reinforced when you overlap your forms causing the viewer's eye to perceive these forms as existing within the same space. Another tip for making forms to appear to coexist in the same space is to keep an eye on your foreshortening; a few of your boxes are bit more dramatic than the rest which breaks the illusion we're working to build up so keep that in mind. Your perspective is on the right track; you're definitely being mindful of trying to make your lines converge and that will improve drastically during the box challenge.

Speaking of that, your lesson 1 is now complete and you are ready to move on to the 250 box challenge. Keep up the good work and we'll see you next time.