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6:20 PM, Wednesday November 15th 2023

Hello certain elf! Here's the crit. And here's the tutorial I mentioned on the crit.

Like I said I want you to check the corrections on the newer pages you did and one more page of boxes with 4-5 boxes! Good luck and make sure you have questions if you have them!

Next Steps:

The corrections I mentioned and one more page with 4-5 boxes

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:51 PM, Saturday November 25th 2023
11:37 PM, Tuesday November 28th 2023

Before moving on, there's one mistake on one of the boxes that tells me you didn't follow the tutorial correctly. Can you point where you made that mistake?

8:29 AM, Wednesday November 29th 2023
edited at 8:37 AM, Nov 29th 2023

The bottom left box that I didn't do properly the dots/ghosting the lines towards the right and extend longer overall. Diverging and almost parallel lines as the outcome.

edited at 8:37 AM, Nov 29th 2023
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