Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

1:27 PM, Friday May 21st 2021

Imgur: The magic of the Internet

Direct Link: https://i.imgur.com/59QWLe8 .jpg

Discover the magic of the internet at Imgur, a community powered enterta...

Any feedback will be appreciated, have a nice day!

2 users agree
1:48 PM, Friday May 21st 2021

This is my first feedback and I just recently finished lesson 1 but I am doing my best.

Lines: Your superimposed lines have a clear starting point without any fraying. There is only fraying at the end of the line. The shorter ones are great. Longer ones are more difficult. I am not sure whether some of them count as wobbly. check if you are really drawing from your shoulder. Your planes are really great!

Ellipses: Your elipses are smooth and drawn confidently. I think they are exactly the way they are supposed to be.

Boxes: I think all your boxes show that you understood the concepts taught.

Next Steps:

You should move ahead to the 250 box challenge.

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
2:28 PM, Saturday May 22nd 2021

Hi! Thanks a lot the feedback, i'll remember the tips!

0 users agree
5:12 PM, Friday May 21st 2021
edited at 5:24 PM, May 21st 2021

Great work!

Strong, confident linework and a clear improvement in your understanding of perspective as you progressed through the exercises.

Your lines do get uncharacteristically wobbly during the rough perspective exercise, but that's to be expected. Just pay attention to that during the 250 Box Challenge, since inaccurate lines compound, making subsequent lines even more inaccurate.

Overall, really good job! Get started on those 250 Boxes!

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 Box Challenge

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete. In order for the student to receive their completion badge, this critique will need 2 agreements from other members of the community.
edited at 5:24 PM, May 21st 2021
2:30 PM, Saturday May 22nd 2021

Hey!

I do have an issue with consistency, but i'm working on it.

Thanks for the feedback!

The recommendation below is an advertisement. Most of the links here are part of Amazon's affiliate program (unless otherwise stated), which helps support this website. It's also more than that - it's a hand-picked recommendation of something I've used myself. If you're interested, here is a full list.
Sakura Pigma Microns

Sakura Pigma Microns

A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

This website uses cookies. You can read more about what we do with them, read our privacy policy.