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Thank you for critiqing my work. If you would like me to redo anything please feel free to ask. and if it isn't too much to ask can I get a critique for my lesson 3??
This is much better. Your textures look much more three dimensional, and you sausage forms are much more simple. Just be careful not to go overboard on contour lines.
Your form intersections feel much more complete and solid, with more care on each one.
Well done! Marking lesson as complete.
I have not finished Lesson 3 or gotten a critique myself so I don't feel comfortable giving you a critique unfortunately.
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Get a critique on Lesson 3. Less is more with regards to construction and contours. Well done!
Thank you so much
I'll do my best. And i hope you have a lot of fun in your journey as well
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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