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7:47 PM, Thursday September 14th 2023

You're doing a good job of bringing your vanishing points in closer, that being said.

Boxes 10, 18 and 27 have all of their lines extending correctly, the rest of your boxes suffer from at least one set of lines extending in the wrong direction still.

I'll be asking you for 20 more boxes please. Be sure to read through the guides provided to you in your critique again, and feel free to ask any questions you have before getting started.

Next Steps:

20 more boxes please.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
8:48 PM, Saturday September 16th 2023
3:29 PM, Monday September 18th 2023

These are all extending correctly, good work.

You often leave 1 set of lines parallel still so be sure to experiment with bringing all 3 vanishing points in closer in your own time.

I'll be marking your submisson complete.

Keep practicing boxes and previous exercises as warmups and best of luck in lesson 2.

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 2.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
11:08 PM, Monday September 18th 2023

Thank you so much for being patient with me! Your explanations were great! :)

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