4:08 PM, Saturday June 13th 2020
Congrats KOROSAL on your oonstance to going through the lessons for the second time. Here's my in depth critique on your work
SUPERIMPOSED LINES I see a little bit of fraying on both ends, take more time to reposition the pen on the paper. Wobble in the expect range. Execution is ok
GHOSTED LINES Sometimes you miss the starting point too. This goes back to the repositioning problem
GHOSTED PLANES Accuracy improving. Good job overall
TABLE OF ELLIPSES Very confident. Nice shape. Now you need to aim for a better accuracy because they are a bit floating in the table
ELLIPSES IN PLANES You had more trouble with this one. You are not hitting the points quite often and the ellipses are less coherently passing over themselves on successive runs
FUNNELS Ellipses are definitely something you need to work on. I suggest adding the ellipses in planes exercise to your warmup consistently. Funnels sometimes too.
PLOTTED PERSPECTIVE There is little line weight added but good execution
ROUGH PERSPECTIVE Very good. Shows that you are getting very good at boxes
ROTATED BOXES Exercise very well understood. Bravo
ORGANIC PERSPECTIVE Some boxes are a bit distorted and some in the back are a bit too foreshortned. Good enough anyway
Next Steps:
Next step, you already know it, 250 boxes
If you are not doing them already, I suggest warmup, the faq under this one https://drawabox.com/faq/grinding (there is no link to it)
Also the site needs more reviewers. If you could spare some time to do some, that'll be great: you can either follow this templare or this one