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12:45 PM, Friday February 17th 2023

Hello, thanks for the critique! Read through it and tried to improve with my 20 boxes. Here is the link to them

https://imgur.com/a/5UOsqoV

I added line weight and convergence lines for the inner corners. I'm not really confident that I've addressed everything you said though, since many of the boxes seemed to have incorrect inner corners. But I'll let you judge that. Thanks again and have a great day.

1:19 PM, Friday February 17th 2023

It looks a lot better! I think you have addressed the major issues. The point is to see how off your inner corners are, not that they are perfect. This time, since you have done all the convergence lines, you will immediately see what to work in. As for the other convergences, it still looks quite good. Congratulations on finishing ????

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2:46 PM, Friday February 17th 2023

Thank you! will move on to lesson 2 now then. Thanks again for looking over these.

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