Hi TryingToDrawaBox, I've checked your challenge submission.

Congratulations on completing the challenge, while for what I've seen yours looks like a wild ride, I can see that you made a lot of improvement as you progressed through it; Your boxes got bigger and more confident, while you are also hitting more convergence points! However, there is still for improvement.

First of all, in a certain point of this challenge you realized that you could make that one set of the parallels from your boxes were fully parallel, and that would make everything easier since you would only have to worry about two vanishing points. Well that wasn't the point of this challenge- What you did on those boxes is called two point perspective, while the idea of this challenge is practice boxes with 3 point perspective, I recommend you go back to the box section of lesson 1 to see the difference between 1, 2 and 3 point perspective explained in a simplified way! Also, if this is topic it's still not clear, you should really go to read this, this and this section, since this is a key concept to understand moving forward.

Even though you did a lot of 2 p.p boxes, you mostly did 3 p.p, so it's not like you didn't took advantage of this challenge!

Another thing that I'm noticing is that in a lot of cases you are extending your lines however you want, in some cases you are extending them back, in others to the front and in quite a lot you are just doing both! There is a correct way which is explained in the challenge page, and that's extending them back to check how they are converging to the vanishing point. Be more careful moving on to other lessons when reading all the material.

I'm seeing you are having issues with the back corner, check this construction method next time you are warming up with some boxes!

A very big thing that you are missing in this challenge, is line weight- This is not an aesthetic choice from this course, it's a tool we have to clarify how our forms sit and relate to each other in the space we are creating. In this case, by highlighting the silhouette of our boxes, we are making showing the viewer where that box is facing and also strengthening the illusion to ourselves of how that is a 3d and solid form. Here is the explanation on this topic from the challenge page. Take all this into account movig forward to future lessons.

In a lot of boxes it looks like you are correcting your lines, try to fight this urge since all it does is making everything look messier, also, remember that all we can do to assure that our lines come as we want them to is before the actual line on the ghosting phase- So, take your time ghosting every line to assure it turns out confident and as how you plan it.

Overall, good job on pushing through this challenge, make sure that you read more carefully everything that is presented on the lesson's page and videos in future lessons, since a lot of the mistakes you did here could've been easily avoided.

One last thing however, I would advice you don't move forward with your lessons until someone has given you feedback, I know it's hard to get your work critiqued, but I advice you go to the channel called @critique-exchange from the discord server and read the pins there!

I'm gonna go ahead and mark this challenge as completed! Keep it up.

great lines. nice boxes