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11:35 PM, Friday July 24th 2020
Hello!
Your superimposed lines look good and on your ghosting lines, it seems like you try to correct or redo some lines. Your lines will get better as you practice, so if you get a bad line, it's ok! Just make sure you avoid correcting lines for future exercises.
On the ghosting planes, you left a lot of space on your page in the first page. Uncomfortable suggested in the assignment to try to make the planes interlocking to make the best use of the space. The plane you made looked quite good though and you avoided making autocorrections on them! Make sure your ellipses in the planes stay with in the edges of the planes.
On the drawing ellipses in funnels exercise, your ellipses should increase in degree as they move farther from the center. The ellipses look good though! Just make sure the keep them from going outside of the lines of the plane or funnels.
Your boxes look quite good! The rotating boxes exercise is really difficult, so that should get better as you get more practice , but make sure to pay attention to how the angle of each corner and the length of the edges change as the box rotates Your organic perspective boxes look a bit sparse on some of them, but they look good!
Next Steps:
Move onto the 250 box challenge that should help a lot with understanding how the boxes move through space! Make sure to return to some of these lesson one exercises for warm up!
11:29 PM, Saturday July 25th 2020
Thank very much for your feedback! I am already at the 250 box chalenge, its gonna take a little while but soon I'll be posting it!
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