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7:38 PM, Wednesday December 2nd 2020

https://imgur.com/a/YB3ido5

Tried adding cast shadow near where the larger form starts to pinch slightly as well, feels incorrect unless the form is being pushed in fairly dramatically there

11:59 PM, Thursday December 3rd 2020

This is definitely a step in the right direction.

Some of your forms do get a bit complex still, and you're still turning them very sharply which leads to flat edges but it's an improvement over your previous attempts.

Your shadows do make sense here but don't be afraid to push them further.

I'll be marking your submission as complete and moving you on to lesson 3, good luck.

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