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10:06 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
edited at 6:15 AM, Mar 7th 2022

Greetings Vintages , I reviewed your homework and here are my observations;

1 super imposed lines

short lines are quite good,

but extended lines suffer from *S* curve.

2 ghosted lines

very little overshooting,

long lines still have curves.

3 ghosted planes

taking a picture before you draw ellipses over planes is adviced. 

planes are constructed better with each attempt, that's a good start.

4 table of ellipse

gets better with each attempt

5 elipse on planes

second stroke is consistently shortter than first one,

try not to tighten the arm in attempt to follow the previous path of ellipse

6 funnels

don't make the funnels too convex

7 plotted perspcetive

good as supposed to be.

8 rough perspective

decent attempt

9 rotated boxes

if an mistae is made don't redraw over it to fix it.

10 organic perspective

draw boxes with varied dimensions if you may.

major take aways

fix the S curve in the strokes

don't over draw to fix mistakes

if you are tired don't rush to the end of the homework. take rest and resume when recharged.

Next Steps:

please take your time to fix s curve

repeat the ellipse on planes worksheets

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 6:15 AM, Mar 7th 2022
2:44 AM, Monday March 7th 2022
edited at 1:11 AM, Mar 8th 2022

Hi, thanks for replying to my post..

I've repeated elipses in planes exercises and I've also taken the picture before drawing the elipses on top of it.

Here is the link: https://imgur.com/a/OpDubFv

Yours Sincerely,

Vintages

edited at 1:11 AM, Mar 8th 2022
6:03 AM, Monday March 7th 2022

well performed Sir Vintages

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