10:06 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
Greetings Vintages , I reviewed your homework and here are my observations;
1 super imposed lines
short lines are quite good,
but extended lines suffer from *S* curve.
2 ghosted lines
very little overshooting,
long lines still have curves.
3 ghosted planes
taking a picture before you draw ellipses over planes is adviced.
planes are constructed better with each attempt, that's a good start.
4 table of ellipse
gets better with each attempt
5 elipse on planes
second stroke is consistently shortter than first one,
try not to tighten the arm in attempt to follow the previous path of ellipse
6 funnels
don't make the funnels too convex
7 plotted perspcetive
good as supposed to be.
8 rough perspective
decent attempt
9 rotated boxes
if an mistae is made don't redraw over it to fix it.
10 organic perspective
draw boxes with varied dimensions if you may.
major take aways
fix the S curve in the strokes
don't over draw to fix mistakes
if you are tired don't rush to the end of the homework. take rest and resume when recharged.
Next Steps:
please take your time to fix s curve
repeat the ellipse on planes worksheets