Hi there! Crits come in a little slow, so here's mine!

Before I begin critting, I do want to note the title on one your pages, the ghosted lines, "Scott Robinson How to Draw". From what I know, it wants to prioritise accuracy over a straight line. I know that many of DaB's exercises are derived from there, but the goals of DaB are slightly different. Similarly, where H2D asks for a single draw through of an ellipse, DaB asks for 2, maximum 3. I feel that in general, you may have either been heeding H2D or reusing pages from there when approaching this. Don't. Each resource serves its own purpose, and you should follow each resource as instructed, failing to do so would beat the point of the resource. That said, on with the crits.

On your lines: They need quite a good deal more confidence. I think your ghosting may not have been confident, or you're not trusting your ghosting enough. Your lines are wobbly, and, while largely accurate, do not appear confident at all. You need to remember to ghost with confidence, and do so mindfully. I will say that there are some lines, particularly in the ghosted lines section, where I see confidence being put in, around the right side of the page. This is good. Continue to aim for this. Even if the line would become inaccurate, that's okay. A confident line can be worked with, a wobbly one cannot. A page of superimposed lines is also missing.

With regards to your ellipses, once again, they need a large deal of confidence. Once again, rememeber that you should ghost the proper shape of an ellipse, and then execute with confidence, even if it should become inaccurate. In your funnels, some of your ellipses aren't drawn through, and, some aren't properly aligned to the minor axis. Do take note of this.

I'll spit up the boxes section into its own individual section, as there's something to point out in each that I think is important to take note.

Plotted perspective: You should remember that application of the hatching should be done mindfully, and with a ruler. In addition, you can add line weight to the silhouette of the box to clarify its shape, as seen here: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/14/step8

Rough perspective: The important thing to note here is that, because this is one point perspective, the front and back faces should be parallel or perpendicular to the horizon line only. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/6/vanishingpoints The diagram here shows what I mean. As you can see, the faces still remain their rectangular shape no matter their distance to the vanishing point. To do so, you can employ the technique shown here: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/15/step4. In doing this, you ensure that your lines are about correctly done before executing the stroke. Remember that you can place as many planning points as you wish- nothing is set in stone until you execute the stroke. Also note to keep the location of the vanishing point in mind when planning (so, for example, if the entire box is above the horizon line, then all the diagonals will point in a downward direction. Similarly, if the box lies somewhere on the horizon line, then depending on the corner, the diagonals can either go in an upwards or downwards direction, and so on). Also, you haven't drawn correction lines for all diagonals. Remember to do that for all the diagonals.

Rotated boxes: The immediate thing that stands out to me on this one would be the fact that your boxes are not close to each other, frankly beating the point of the exercise all together https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/guessing, as seen here. It is okay to have the boxes overlap, its kind of a thing throughout this entire exercise, since the idea of this exercise is using adjacent vertices to estimate correct vanishing points. You also fail to draw through your boxes, like https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/notdrawingthrough. Some of your boxes aren't even complete. When I say have the boxes overlap, you can think of this first example: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/step4. Notice how part of the boxes overlap. This is perfectly fine, and is expected in this exercise, as it allows you to properly put 2 vertices close to each other, and allow you to estimate the vanishing point based off that. While I understand that it may be hard to tell the lines apart, you can use line weight to separate the lines into something more readable, https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/cqvxap/i_created_an_extra_rotated_boxes_guide_for_people/ This guide is really useful into easing you into the idea of rotation, so I'd recommend giving it a read.

Organic perspective: Box construction aside, I think this one's okay. You can most definitely push for a greater change in size, to properly reinforce the idea that "bigger=closer". As with rotated boxes, you can (and I recommend) to have the boxes overlap, then use line weight to clarify which box is on top. Don't redo your lines, though, even if they're incorrect. Trying to fix it may bring more attention to it, making the mistake worse.

Overall, I think you work needs quite a bit of work. I want you to re-read all the pages of lesson 1, and re-watch the videos if you can. Do so meticulously, don't skip anything, all the notes are important. I also want you to do some revisions.