10:19 PM, Sunday November 28th 2021
Lines
In the superimposed lines exercises there is fraying on both the start and end of your lines. You should put your pen down on the starting dot then move it to the end. Fraying at this point should be on only the ends.
E.g
https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/1585f266.jpg
Your lines do look confident and ghosted I don't see any wobbling.
Ellipses
In the ellipses tables you have not drawn through some of the ellipses at least twice. And remember to ghost your ellipses when drawing them in.
In the funnels some are slanted although they are in their bounds and in the top right funnel there are gaps between some elilpses. They should be touching each other.
Boxes
For plotted perspective I think you should divide the whole page into 3 in portrait. Working with things small is not beneficial to get the point across.
For the organic boxes you should plan and plot your line as you do for the rough perspective or in plotted lines exercise.
Rotated boxes
Again
plan your lines with the plotting method.
You have gone over multiple lines and the cross hatching is not using straight lines, many taper . I can see the boxes on the right hand center are in bold, I think U went over them to cover up the lines that where there. But U should use one confident line if it is not straight or misses keep it there and continue. Use one line after U have plotted the line out. And keep it one line don't go over it or try to make it bold to fix it. Over time your lines will start being straight and on target. Lineweight should be added using the ghosting method on part of the line to show overlapping.
Also your boxes don't seem to be rotating. They are more like this :
https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg
Than this
https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/6e259e79.jpg
Overall
Plot and plan all your lines
Draw though all ellipses at least twice
Ghost the ellipses
Next Steps:
Redo the plotted perspective exercise on a page in portrait divided into 3.
And redo the rotated boxes (not for it to come out looking amazing just following the process) the main point here is for the U to be plotting the lines, rotating the boxes and hatching in with straight lines to the best of your current ability
:)