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8:24 PM, Thursday August 20th 2020

Hello!

For the most part you show a lot of confidence on your lines and ellipses, good job!

Some of the lines are a bit curvy on the ghosted lines exercise, but you did improve on the last exercises. Remember to always rotate the page in an angle that you find comfortable and to draw with your shoulder.

As I said, the ellipses look good and confident. Some of them are not exactly accurate, but that will get better with practice. Also, on the funnels exercise they don't look really symmetrical: the minor axis should cut each ellipse in two symmetrical halves.

The perspective exercises look good too, but when you want to put some weight on some lines, try not to draw them so many times: you make one line, and then you do another one on top of it just one more time (after you ghost it, of course)

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250 box challenge!

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7:38 AM, Sunday August 30th 2020
edited at 7:38 AM, Aug 30th 2020

Thank you so much for your critique and your time :) . I'll keep practicing it!.

btw I've finished 250 box challange!!, here https://drawabox.com/community/submission/8566RLUE

feel free to look at it, thank you again.

edited at 7:38 AM, Aug 30th 2020
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